M54
Seduced by Stranger fantasy
November 22 2013
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RHP User
12 years ago
what you are looking for here James,is it a critique ?.....check out Randoms Autosex thread....that post managed to be both sexy ,self deprecating and funny as hell. However many people will enjoy your story,keep writing and perhaps post in the RHP comp.
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RHP User
12 years ago
I read the first few lines, saw how long your post was, and just gave up! Although I did make one observation. You have a single (separated) male profile. Yet you say you have a partner......
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RHP User
12 years ago
re-read the opening introduction to be reminded that this was your partner's secret fantasy, (and all was ok with the instructor breaking all the rules that would normally have his ass thrown in jail or visited by a vigilante mob with baseball bats for retribution for not being given a green light to proceed), but hey, I like your writing style. Detailed, erotic, daring. Keep it up. [insert thumbs up emoticon here]
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RHP User
12 years ago
Not the best either. It's very obviously written by a man, so maybe other guys would find it more stimulating? Good effort though, I hope your partner liked it. One question: If he's fucking her from behind while she's face down on the mat, how the hell can her "gorgeous ass" be against his balls?
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RHP User
12 years ago
Quoting 'MsElle72' You have a single (separated) male profile. Yet you say you have a partner...... I see you've changed it to "Ask me", OP. Maybe "Attached" would be the honest way to go? "Ask me" is just one big red flag to me.
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RHP User
12 years ago
OP - that [profile shot of yours looks like a smiley face... Didn't read the story but had a good chuckle.
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RHP User
12 years ago
Do a picture search on Stingray photo bomb... No offence OP, great body. Hadn't noticed it until Devious mentioned it. . . Just read your story again. I do wish I had a lover with a tongue long enough to "slide against my g-spot". Now will the French guy fuck Jack already? Bring on part two!
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RHP User
12 years ago
I love that picture... Best photo bomb ever! You can't even set that up.
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RHP User
12 years ago
See above
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RHP User
12 years ago
Quoting 'Mesmerised' Do a picture search on Stingray photo bomb... No offence OP, great body. Hadn't noticed it until Devious mentioned it. . . Just read your story again. I do wish I had a lover with a tongue long enough to "slide against my g-spot". Now will the French guy fuck Jack already? Bring on part two! Unfortunately Mes, Jack or Pierre arent really the bicurious types, and I think they have their hands full with charlotte... heres part 2. Apologies if the outcome is a bit predictable. Ive got a few more if you think they're any good.Would love to be able to publish a volume of short erotic stories. Give up my day job. Look at how much money whatever her name is has made from 50 Shades of Shite..... They were still sprawled on the mat when Charlotte heard the step on the stair again. She lifted her head slightly to see the feet of the French instructor. Frantically she grabbed for her yoga pants and slid them back on while covering her bare breasts with her other hand. “Hi Jack. Hi Charlotte,” he said. “Sorry to bother you. Just came back to get my extra uniform.”“Hi Pierre,” said Jack. “Just revising some of today’s lesson.”Pierre ignored him. “Charlotte, I can teach you how to get out from under that pin,” he said. He grinned and moved towards her.“I think I’ve probably got enough homework to see me through till next week” Charlotte stammered, her face quite flushed both from the pounding she’d just received and the embarrassment of Pierre walking in on them.Pierre pulled her up into his arms and kissed her thoroughly.She was still extremely aroused from her session with Jack. She kissed him back, long, hard and passionately. Here we go again... she thought to herself.Pierre turned again to Jack and said:“Do you mind if I take Charlotte through some of my moves Master?”Jack replied with a wicked smile.. “I’m here for you Sensai, if she gets the better of you”“Thank you Master...”Pierre picked Charlotte up, laid her down in the sparring ring, then climbed up himself. He pushed Charlotte’s yoga pants back down and spread her legs wide apart as he undid his black belt. As he disrobed, she was in ore of the physique of her younger instructor. His pants dropped to the ring to reveal a most enormous, rock hard cock jutting out proudly in front of his washboard stomach. My god, Charlotte thought to herself. He’s magnificent......Fuck I love this sport!!!Jack complimented Charlotte on how well she was doing as he too climbed into the ring, Positioning himself beside her face as Pierre stood menacingly between her legs. Jack caught Charlotte by surprise as he thrust his hips towards her head craddled her head with his strong hands and forced his reignited cock between her lips as he fucked her face while Pierre drove further and further into her pussy. Charlotte was being stretched to what she believed was her limit. She wasn’t sure the younger instructor was all the way in, but he settled into a slow rhythm and each stroke sent jolts of pleasure and pain as the sensations radiated outwards from her clit.She felt 2 hands on each one of her breasts. Squeezing and pinching her hard nipples as they rocked her body between them. Charlotte shivered with excitement and pleasure. She experienced her first orgasm just from the thought of having two men using her for their pleasure.Jack continued to work on her Charlottes nipples as Pierre reached down and started to finger her clit as he pounded in and out. Charlotte was lost in ecstasy.... it felt so damn good. She sucked Jack’s cock faster, taking him as deep into my mouth as she could. In her delirium, Charlotte heard him say, “You are so fucking sexy.” She couldn’t believe how turned on she felt controlling Jack with her mouth. She didn’t even normally like giving head to her husband but at this moment in time, the sensation of his has smooth skin against the inside of her cheeks felt excruciatingly arousing.Pierre paused momentarily his between Charlottes legs and stood back to take in the erotic attraction of their willing student. He asked Jack if he wanted to change places and with a nod of his sweat covered head, Jack slid in between Charlottes legs once again. Pierre moved up to Charlottes breasts and worked them passionately while she stroked his cock furiously. Even with Charlotte grasping it in both her hands, Pierre’s cock felt enormous. She felt Pierre move one hand to her clit, working it while Jack continued with deep, frenzied strokes. It was all too much for Charlottes as she came explosively again, gripping Jack’s cock with her muscles. She couldn’t remember the last time she had reached orgasm more than once during lovemaking. Certainly not with her husband, and most probably not since her early 20’s when she was at her sexual peak. The massive orgams caused her to moan loudly, her cunt walls spasming uncontrollably – al causing poor Jack to near the limits of control. Charlotte pulled him out of her, begging him to explode all over her tits. But Jack was not done yet!!The junior instructor moved to the side as his Master got on top of Charlotte, putting his cock into her mouth whilst lowering his mouth over my pussy. She was still pulsating from her enormous climax. The mere touch of his tongue made her shiver with delight as she contemplated yet another earth shattering explosion of pleasure. Surely not a 4th one!!! She chastised the wanton sexual animal that had been unlocked by these two magnificent studs. She thought back to her University days. The lust she had experienced with her 2nd boyfriend who fucked her on her parents dinner table and made her come over and over again as they desecrated every room in the house one weekend when her parents were away (even in the lift). Back then, nothing made Charlotte climax faster or make her more aroused than sixty nine. Just making her boyfriend say the words use to send shudders through her loins. And it was apparent to her as she lay pinned to the sparring ring that this talented Jujitsu Master was very good at it. He knew just where to lick - the exact speed, intensity and pressure to use, bringing Charlotte to helplessly flailing into NUMBER FOUR!!!. Charlotte tried to regain her composure. She was now transported to a place that she could only return from through continual and sustained sexual indulgence. She was starting to become more confident around her Masters – Now directing Jack to get on his back. She straddled him, smiling down on him with a wild, wanton lustfull look in her eyes, and slowly lowered herself down onto him. She felt strong hands on her and looked up to see Pierre guiding and helping her to take Jack deeper and deeper into her inner core. She felt so amazingly full. She realized that this position created a different opportunity for the younger instructor as he knelt behind her. She could feel his enormous cock pressing between her tight buttocks. He was rock hard. Charlotte knew what he wanted, and with the rush of pleasure she was experiencing, there was no way of refusing either him or herself. Pierre told Charlotte to roll over so that she was almost lying on top of Jack. Pierre began to rub his enormous tool in long firm strokes between her dripping pussy and arse cheeks. Her wetness lubricated his cock, creating an amasingly pleasurable sensation as he rubbed back and forth, harder and faster with each stroke. The sensation was transforming Pierre into a sex crazed animal as he groaned, “You’re so fucking tight. It feels so good.” As he increased his rubbing action up and down her crack.. Charlotte couldn’t believe how good the intensely erotic the pressure felt, but with each inch Pierre pushed further, it brought new levels of pleasure. The feeling of two magnificent studs in her was one she had never experienced before, and it was bringing Charlotte the most pleasure she had ever felt in her life. Both instructors were able to match their rhythm causing Charlotte to explode with another orgasm. Is that 5 now.... a new record???This one was the most intense she had ever felt. It caused both her entrances to contract and tighten around Jack and Pierre. She could feel Jack growing larger and harder and she knew from her experience earlier in the lesson, this was what happened when he was about to cum. She climbed off both of them and grabbed both cocks into her hands, stroking hard and fast. Charlotte’s doting instructors both came at the same time, as she skilfully directed their impressive loads all over her chest, neck and stomach. The volume of fluid astounded her......as it kept on shooting forth from their magnificent cocks. She was completely exhausted as she collapsed in the ring next to Pierre with Jack on the other side of her. Completely satisfied, Charlotte had just defeated two Jujitsu Masters in the ring at the same time. Not bad for one of the older members of the class.
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RHP User
12 years ago
Again, . it's not bad but in my opinion, but not quite my style. It does seem to be written by a man for men. I like stories that are a lot more descriptive of sounds, smells, etc. . One problem I for me: . Pierre stood menacingly between her legs. Jack caught Charlotte by surprise as he thrust his hips towards her head craddled her head with his strong hands and forced his reignited cock between her lips as he fucked her face while Pierre drove further and further into her pussy. . I think you missed the part where Pierre got down and entered her. Unless he's a ninja as well as Sensei? . . Do post it in the stories section, yours is certainly better than most things I've read there.
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RHP User
12 years ago
"No Retreat, No Surrender" The erotic version.... and this time Jean Claude Van Damme can play the French instructor instead of the bad Russian guy. Hehe - Posted from rhpmobile
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RHP User
12 years ago
I agree with Mes, it's a little too much on the technical side and doesn't really describe how the woman is feeling, I don't get that sense of heat that she is supposed to be feeling. I would take out all the arrrghhh's, it makes it sound a little unsophisticated although Maybe that's what Mes means about it being written for men? A woman is focused on the sensations at that time, how does she feel, how does he look, the heat in his eyes, as he groans how it makes her body tighten in anticipation. Yada yada yada..... Too straight for me though... I prefer the kinkier stuff. :)
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RHP User
12 years ago
And the woman being pounded hard by enormous rock hard cocks, while having her nipples attacked and stuff. . Just not lyrical enough for me.
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RHP User
12 years ago
Her pussy smelt sweet like a freshly made apple pie..... Pity about her feet though lol :p - Posted from rhpmobile
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RHP User
12 years ago
Ill try and write something new from a real woman's perspective Any requests on a theme or title? - Posted from rhpmobile
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